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Re: New college Essay
Posted By: Shandar, on host 216.192.228.34
Date: Thursday, October 26, 2000, at 21:21:21
In Reply To: New college Essay posted by unipeg on Thursday, October 26, 2000, at 21:14:57:

If I'm lucky, someday I might even learn his knack for naming stuffed animals.
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Awesome essay on the whole! Most excellent ending! If getting the readers attention and grabbing his heart is what you're after, you've certainly done it.

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